14 Comments

  1. Aditi Kapur
    September 30, 2018 @ 10:32 am

    Loved your story on Write Over the Weekend challenge. Way to go:)

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  2. Sonia Chatterjee
    September 30, 2018 @ 10:57 am

    Even I had conceptualized a story on army initially but decided on another profession. Your story is indeed the truth of the brave matrys of our soil. Beautifully written.

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  3. PraGun
    September 30, 2018 @ 12:47 pm

    That’s a wow story. Truly & beautifully expressed from a soldier’s mouth. Can relate to it.

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  4. Esha Chakraborty
    September 30, 2018 @ 3:16 pm

    Brilliant

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  5. Sudip Saha
    September 30, 2018 @ 6:47 pm

    We are able to sleep peacefully at night because our borders are protected. Jai Jaiwan. Jai Hind!

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  6. Sanjota Purohit
    September 30, 2018 @ 6:53 pm

    It just bought tears! 🙁 Salute to our brave soldiers.

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  7. preeti
    October 1, 2018 @ 12:18 pm

    The way you described the events of a soldier returning to his home every time and then how he was brought home this time just melted me inside. That courage to give up their life so that their country can be protected. To me, it is the purest form of love any human can have. Nothing is above this!!! Beautiful post Mahesh.
    #readbypreetispanorama

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  8. Mayuri Nidigallu
    October 2, 2018 @ 6:21 am

    Beautiful. Just beautiful! Never saw the end coming! The perfect tribute to our brave soldiers! Your best story, so far, MJ!

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  9. Anita
    October 2, 2018 @ 7:29 am

    Very touching.
    Well expressed. Surprise ending.
    Thanks to the sacrifices of our warriors, we are not worriers.
    I feel terribly guilty when they lay their lives so that we can enjoy our freedom…

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  10. Pragnya Mishra
    October 7, 2018 @ 1:19 pm

    Narration by a death solider teared me up. Soldiers lay their life so easily for the land leaving behind own families for the sake of entire nation. Well written Mahesh.

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  11. Komal
    October 9, 2018 @ 3:38 am

    Beautiful. Very well narrated. Loved it.

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