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  1. Suhasini
    October 13, 2018 @ 11:10 am

    Wonderful story line from the kids point of view

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  2. Manas Mukul
    October 13, 2018 @ 2:25 pm

    Nice one Mahesh. Keep the good work going.

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  3. Preeti
    October 13, 2018 @ 3:44 pm

    SImple and sweet story. The message of thinking about someone else before your own self is brought out beautifully. In life, we wish to have so many things but what is the point of having such things at the cost of somebody else’s misfortune.
    #readbypreetispanorama

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  4. Sonia Chatterjee
    October 13, 2018 @ 10:03 pm

    Such a sweet story with a strong underlying message. I know this will be a WOW post for sure.

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  5. Aditi Kapur
    October 14, 2018 @ 12:49 pm

    Beautiful story with a good theme.

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  6. Sudip Saha
    October 14, 2018 @ 8:38 pm

    Haha… An alarm clock to detect lies. That would be a great idea. All the best to you.

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  7. Srinivasan
    October 15, 2018 @ 1:40 pm

    Hahaha. Lovely 🙂

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  8. Abhijit
    October 16, 2018 @ 2:33 pm

    Nice take on the prompt.. Great message. Why expect something without paying the price. Alarm bell must ring when such a thought arises.

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  9. Esha Chakraborty
    October 17, 2018 @ 1:32 pm

    How cute

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  10. Anita
    October 18, 2018 @ 7:04 am

    Mom to the rescue. She explained so nicely. Kids are so innocent.
    Wish alarm would notify us if & when anyone was lying to us…
    I wished the same in my post for #wow 🙂

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  11. anupriya
    October 25, 2018 @ 5:33 am

    A very sweet take on the prompt. You stories always have this underlying message without loosing out on the entertainment element. Kudos!

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