7 Comments

  1. Iain
    September 23, 2018 @ 5:57 pm

    I saw something similar in the prompt, without the extra twist. Nicely done.

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  2. CS Knotts
    September 23, 2018 @ 7:12 pm

    Too smart for their own good, both of them. Well done.

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  3. Akshata
    September 24, 2018 @ 8:49 am

    an evil person surely deserves this. Atleast the reader will not pity both of them

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  4. Abhijit
    September 24, 2018 @ 11:15 am

    No one trusting no body. What a state we have come to. A nice thriller, though.

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  5. Anurag Bakhshi
    September 25, 2018 @ 7:38 am

    A lose-lose situation ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Anita
    September 26, 2018 @ 1:23 pm

    Both of them had similar thoughts.
    Mission successful for both, but they died without enjoying the business profits.
    Imagine what if the bomb in the car had exploded when Amit was out dumping Kulkarn’s body to the sea! No such luck!

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  7. Dahlia
    September 27, 2018 @ 2:43 pm

    True partners! ๐Ÿ˜€

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